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Wednesday, September 5, 2018

Ice palace week 2!

In rimu this week for writing we did more ice palace work. I  am sorry to say that I am posting another writing thing, I know I did one last week but I just had to show you what I wrote. We had to fill in the blanks of the words and also add 1 or 2 more paragraphs of our own. Then decided to post this on my blog because I had to post today by the teachers and I love what I have done so far with my work. I found it hard and easy at times. It was a tiny bit harder when I had to add another paragraph, in these circumstances. I hope you enjoy.





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  1. Mrs SpraggSeptember 5, 2018 at 9:47 PM

    Wow Ian, what a compelling piece of writing. I was mesmerised with each line. Your description and use of ispace has been clearly crafted to create feeling. I can see and feel what Ivan feels. Well done Ian, your hard work and perseverance pays off. You should be proud.
    :) Mrs Spragg

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2018 at 11:28 AM

    Thank you Mrs Spragg. I tried to give everything a sole. Did how are your travels going ? I hope you are having a happy, funny, great time. Kind regards Ian.

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