The Ice palace

In Rimu this week we did some writing work based on the book, THE ICE PALACE! I chose to post this on my blog. We first had to look at some photos and write some sentences based on the idea of the photos we saw. Then we wrote a story based on the starting sentence from the book and the sentence we picked that I wrote myself. I would love you guys and girls to give feedback if I need to change my sentences or add, or take away anything. I hope you enjoy.