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Friday, November 23, 2018

Put myself in a story

In Rimu this week we had an activity to make our self in a story. I had enjoyed this concept because I could put myself in something I love. Also the character I played showed my more hyper personality in a way. I chose to do this because this was what I had finished this week and was new. I based this of Undertale.

 I hope you enjoy.


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  1. Wow Ian, this is such a great story. I really loved the detail in your descriptions and the types of words that you have used to make it more interesting for the reader. I also really enjoyed your illustrations down the bottom. The game kind of reminded me of those older arcade games that you play on those big machines...
    A tip to make your story better would be to read it out loud to yourself so that you can hear any mistakes you may have made - there are a few in there that could be fixed if you did this.
    I was unsure what an undertale story was so I had to ask around... it sounds like a really interesting genre. Do you enjoy writing in this style? Are there any books you have read in this genre?

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    1. Thank's Miss Morgan. I did enjoy writing like this. I decided to write an undertale story because It is a really interesting game, that has a lot of ethics and humor involved in it. I have read books not in this genre but similar aspects/concepts. I have decided to do some editing when I have finished the series plot an drawings. Is there any ideas you would like to add to this ?

      Kind regards Ian.

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    2. Oh very cool... I was thinking this morning that it kind of has a similar genre to Wreck it Ralph? Would you say that?
      Hmmm ideas to add... dragons! Or a dog! Or a dog and dragons! (Two things that make stories excellent in my eyes! Haha). What kind of ideas are you after? Storyline ideas Character ideas? Problems? Solutions?

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    3. Thanks Miss Morgan. A dog it is ! There are some similarities to Wreck It Ralph. I think a good dog name is Kelp. I also had an idea that you might like. I was thinking that you might like to help me send this questionnaire based on the environment (air pollution). I thought you would like to share this for some classes. That is all. Hope you see my next post.
      Kind regards Ian.

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