In rimu this week and the last we had been learning about direct speech for a our new story tale writing. I found this moderately ok to do. If there is any feedback how to make this better please
tell me. I made this for something new to post for this week. Hope you enjoy
Hi Ian,
ReplyDeleteI'm glad to read that you have found learning about direct speech moderately ok. You seem to have grasped the idea, though it's positioning on the page did make it a little hard to follow. I did enjoy it though and I look forward to reading some traditional tales you have written.
Thanks for sharing,
Mrs Spragg
that d.l.o is cool and that you've use key words and examples but have you tried making your work bigger
ReplyDeleteThanks Kieron. I will update it soon. Anything else you would like to add to make it better ? Have you made somthing like this?
DeleteKind regards Ian.
Hello lan
ReplyDeleteI'm Kaia from Kawakawa primary school. I really like your work and i think maybe next time you should make the photo bigger. But other then that you did great with your work. What did you like about this DLO?.
I liked making it in a presentation that would show how I comprehended of it. Is there any ideas you have for it ? Kind regards Ian
DeleteHi my name is Oshen Kawakawa primary. I like the way you do good work
ReplyDeleteThanks Oshen. Is there any ideas you have for that to make it better
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Kind regards Ian