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Wednesday, November 29, 2017

The Magic Box Poem.

In Rimu this week we had to write a based about another poem called The Magic Box and post on our blogs. We also had to write what is was made out of and what we put inside of it.
I hope you enjoy.

I will put in the box...
A small lighting house.
Shining shouting red sun.
Bold big line connected to my mind.

I will put into the box
Ideas from my brain.
Growing trees as I create it.
Calming beds to put people to sleep.


I will put in the box.
A blue glowing sky, from the trees I growed.
A red sports car that speeds like an olympic runner.
Invisible calm wind to dance with the trees.

I will put in the box.
A bright shining bold blue moon so the tired sun can take a break.
1000 small villages with beautiful houses.
My own version of reality from my personality and my own logic.

My box is fashioned from imagination and daydreaming.
Its hinges are made out passion.

I shall go into the box, then feel alive.

1 comment:

  1. You have filled your poem with the most wonderfully imaginative imagery that leaves me with a great range of pictures. How wonderful to be able to write in a way that sets your reader's imagination alight. Thank you for sharing this great piece of writing. I especially love the idea of 'A bright shining bold blue moon so the tired sun can take a break'. I hope you are planning to write more poems in the near future.

    I look forward to your next blog post.

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