This week in Rimu I added more Paragraphs to The Pen story this is part 2.
I added more stuff to it and also I added a twist to it.
I hope you like this part and the first part hope you enjoy.
Suddenly out of nowhere came a stampede of ink monsters.
Ian was stunned, he didn’t know what to do. The monsters liquefied and went into his throat…
Ian woke up on a bed, it was familiar, he was in his own room. Ian was so tired, he decided to go to sleep. ‘ so you must be thinking, what is going on, well continue and find out.’
Ian was back in the drawing world again, he went to look around. Ian saw a creature, the creature was coming closer and closer, Ian figured out it was a man. Then the man said “ Follow me, I will Lead you to safety.”
The man told Ian how he got there and what not, blah, blah, blah.
After a while Ian found himself back in his room. Ian realised that he could go back to the world when he went asleep. Ian walked into the kitchen and drunk 100 red bull drinks. After that Ian felt sick, he looked at his hands, his veins turned black.
Ian had another personality, it was the ink. Ian was half monster.
that was scary but put more things that are not scary.
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