Today the Year 6s did some shared writing and we learnt an interesting way to start a story using a noun and a relative clause. I also put in a simile and learnt some new interesting words.
The warrior.
Ian
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The warrior, who was scared as a chicken, ran away as fast as a roadrunner.Then the giants laughed so hard they exploded, his troops was so mad they said kill him,”ahh”, said the warrior...so after that the troops had a victory dance. “Never let giants laugh,” says the warriors mum.
Then the troops danced so hard they died and it said on their headstone …. poor troops from dancing so hard. Then the video was posted on boom-tube. warriors email acount.war@midmail.com.
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