In the school holidays, we saw our pet Westie Paisley’s puppies.
We went to a Christchurch breeder called Tom to see them. We bought them toys. They were half the size of my hand.There were four of them. The cheeky puppies sucked on my fingers all the time and they would bite my shoes.
The highlight of day was when we saw two of the puppies wrestling each other, I wished they were mine.
This is what Westie puppies look like.
Hi Ian its Saxon from yaldhurst model school and I think the dogs look really cute. Your making me want to get one. But I think you could do a bit more writing.
ReplyDeleteHello Ian, my name is Ramsay and I'm from St Bernadette's School and I'm a year 6 student. I really like how you wrote some quality adjectives for example "Christchurch Breeder".Something you could work on is Showing a photo of you and the dogs together. Although the westie puppies are cute. You could possibly put some small facts about westie puppies maybe even tips on how to look after them. Keep up the good work
ReplyDeleteHi Ramsay.
DeleteThanks for your comment and advice.
I didn’t put photos of them on the post because I didn’t have any photos with me.
Do you like Westies Ramsay.
Yes Ian, I truly do love westie puppies They are so cute and cuddly I wish I had one. Don't you?
DeleteThanks for your reply Ramsay.
ReplyDeleteWell I agree they are so cute.
I think are the best dog in the world.